Carrara 3, hmm.
Not too bad, but it lacks a certain characteristic I am to expect with a BBC News sequence.
It is a fabulous mock, but it appears very... hm, very
Carrara 3
.
N.B - You may ask "what the hell does very Carrara 3 mean?" Well, MoD once dubbed another BBC News mock with the term "
very Photoshop
." I could understand what he meant eventually.
Ergo - The same ethos applies to my comment here.

Lovely concept, once could say more of a tweak, subtle tweaks I am for.

: Along with other comments here, it does lack a certain depth to it. The camera angles are very obscure - I don't see any mise-en-scenical equilibrium with the edits and the angles. Perhaps it could have been storyboarded a lot better before it was thrown together?
Keep at it however, and well done. (The theme is nice, too.)
h.