By 'cross show promos' I believe you mean a menu. It's okay for a first mock, but it gives a PowerPointy vibe, due to the text and images not being aligned properly.
By 'cross show promos' I believe you mean a menu. It's okay for a first mock, but it gives a PowerPointy vibe, due to the text and images not being aligned properly.
Yes, it is a menu, I couldn't think of the correct name for it.
It would require a bit of work to get this up to the standard of something which could be used on air, but it is achievable.
It would help, as
J. Lyric
mentioned, to use the correct typeface if you're able to (in this case, BBC Reith).
Then I would look at the sizing. Think about the viewer - the text size is currently rather smaller than I'd suggest. If you take a look at the real BBC menus/on screen graphics in general and use that as a guide, you might find it easier.
I would think about the alignment too. Each slide is a bit different. You should be aiming for a bit more consistency and I would suggest creating one template and then editing the colours/logo etc thereafter to keep everything a bit tidier and more consistent with each other.
Also, a brief word to
TheRealThomanory
(above) - it's very easy to write a snippy comment on someone else's work, but having looked at your Gallery and found two mocks (both rated one star), perhaps you should consider the irony of the situation and think before you write unnecessarily harsh and entirely unhelpful feedback in future.
It would require a bit of work to get this up to the standard of something which could be used on air, but it is achievable.
It would help, as
J. Lyric
mentioned, to use the correct typeface if you're able to (in this case, BBC Reith).
Then I would look at the sizing. Think about the viewer - the text size is currently rather smaller than I'd suggest. If you take a look at the real BBC menus/on screen graphics in general and use that as a guide, you might find it easier.
I would think about the alignment too. Each slide is a bit different. You should be aiming for a bit more consistency and I would suggest creating one template and then editing the colours/logo etc thereafter to keep everything a bit tidier and more consistent with each other.
Also, a brief word to
TheRealThomanory
(above) - it's very easy to write a snippy comment on someone else's work, but having looked at your Gallery and found two mocks (both rated one star), perhaps you should consider the irony of the situation and think before you write unnecessarily harsh and entirely unhelpful feedback in future.
This isn't your first mock, you made 2 accounts under names along the lines of "iloveKorea" just prior the site redesign and are trying to troll users on this site for no apparent reason. You're just wasting your own time.
This isn't your first mock, you made 2 accounts under names along the lines of "iloveKorea" just prior the site redesign and are trying to troll users on this site for no apparent reason. You're just wasting your own time.
(I could be wrong and if I am, apologies)
I’m sorry, I’m not aware of this user nor am I that user. I don’t know what would make you think that.
Furthermore, from the quick google search I carried out, which had the user ‘iloveKorea’ as joining on 10th June 2020. I joined in December 2019, so why on earth would I make another account when I already had one?
It's a rough, very unfinished looking design to me. The very first thing you need to do is standardise the logo size, make the font bigger, and just make it overall look consistent for each slide. You're wasting a ton of space. Secondly, you need to make it more interesting. Add the Cbeebies bugs, replace the BBC Two teal with a curve ident still or something like that. And finally, do a google search for the BBC Reith font. It is easy to find, and it is free to download. I would like to see you repost these with those suggestions.