0w3n6 posts since 26 Jul 2019 6 August 2019 6:23pm Granada North West Today I have been learning how to use Apple Motion 5 and got the idea to make a set of titles for what The X Factor celeb edition could look like. In recent years (2016 onwards) the 'outer space' theme has been scrapped but I think this was well-suited for the show so decided to revamp the theme whilst still keeping the planets in the opening. I originally planned to end with a zoom into the UK on Earth as it is in the 2011 titles but this proved very difficult using Apple's Motion 5 so I instead decided to end with a shot of the rotating Earth and then a fade to shots of London then the studio. Please note I have only been using Motion for about 2 weeks so still getting to grips with it. I hope you like my take on X Factor celeb edition (I called it X Factor: The Stars in the titles) and look forward to receiving feedback - hopefully this is better than my previous mock! P.S: Apologies for the 360p vid at the end, was the only good shots of London at night I could find along with a cut to the studios. Permalink
Neil Jones5,641 posts since 23 Dec 2001 6 August 2019 9:10pm Central (West) Midlands Today Considering you've completely ignored the two pieces of feedback you received on your last mock, I'm loathe to pass comment on this... 3 ittrgrey, lukeshep and DeMarkay gave kudos Permalink
DeMarkay578 posts since 29 Oct 2015 7 August 2019 8:41am London London Considering that’s the old studio in Wembley and there’s footage of the new studio on the official X Factor YouTube channel, you need to scrap this and go back to the drawing board. Look at the other XF mock in The Gallery first. Permalink
Jon8,065 posts since 11 Apr 2005 7 August 2019 8:48am Central (West) Midlands Today I think that’s the least of the issues. 1 Brekkie gave kudos Permalink
Josh1,065 posts since 21 Dec 2014 7 August 2019 11:47am Looks more of a sitcom title sequence than the X Factor Fan of the media industry, from the UK. 2 DeMarkay and ittrgrey gave kudos Permalink
UBox803 posts since 31 May 2015 7 August 2019 1:07pm Tyne Tees Look North (North East) Agree with other members that you haven't really developed on the feedback of your previous mock. It just needs rethinking really like why would we have the names of the 4 judges on screen in a pretty random place while Dermot is in view? Doesn't make sense. 2 DeMarkay and ittrgrey gave kudos Permalink
0w3n6 posts since 26 Jul 2019 7 August 2019 1:23pm Granada North West Today DeMarkay posted: Considering that’s the old studio in Wembley and there’s footage of the new studio on the official X Factor YouTube channel, you need to scrap this and go back to the drawing board. Look at the other XF mock in The Gallery first. This mock was meant to be adapting the 2011 titles rather than the 2004-2007 ones. Permalink
0w3n6 posts since 26 Jul 2019 7 August 2019 1:24pm Granada North West Today Jon posted: I think that’s the least of the issues. Please explain rather than being vague Permalink
0w3n6 posts since 26 Jul 2019 7 August 2019 1:34pm Granada North West Today UBox posted: Agree with other members that you haven't really developed on the feedback of your previous mock. It just needs rethinking really like why would we have the names of the 4 judges on screen in a pretty random place while Dermot is in view? Doesn't make sense. I'll be sure to remove the judges from the starting credits. Beginning to think the starting credits are pointless Permalink
Larry the Loafer5,613 posts since 2 Jul 2005 7 August 2019 2:34pm Granada North West Today Josh posted: Looks more of a sitcom title sequence than the X Factor "Our whole universe was in a hot, dense state. Then nearly fourteen billion years ago expansion started, wait..." 5 Brekkie, DeMarkay and 3 otherslukeshepCapybaraJosh gave kudos Permalink
Neil Jones5,641 posts since 23 Dec 2001 7 August 2019 6:27pm Central (West) Midlands Today I will admit giving it opening credits makes it look American. 3 Brekkie, Ste and DeMarkay gave kudos Permalink
DeMarkay578 posts since 29 Oct 2015 11 August 2019 1:15pm London London 0w3n posted: DeMarkay posted: Considering that’s the old studio in Wembley and there’s footage of the new studio on the official X Factor YouTube channel, you need to scrap this and go back to the drawing board. Look at the other XF mock in The Gallery first. This mock was meant to be adapting the 2011 titles rather than the 2004-2007 ones. I’m talking about the new studio that’s been used since 2017 in Acton, West London. Hence the words ‘old studio in Wembley’ Permalink