IT
Yeah, Gill Sans is better
I mostly like it, just not sure on the font used for the programme title at the end.
Yeah, Gill Sans is better
BB
BruceBBC
Not really sure this makes sense? I think it looks messy because you’ve overload their existing titles and just dropped the opacity. And why London? BBC Breakfast is based in Salford. And I agree the font looks bad. Music also sounds clunky.
PO
I used footage of London because the imagery of London is more recognisable and iconic than Salford or Manchester. and the music is the BBC World News America theme, no edits to that.
NE
It's a good mock overall - I like it!
I particuarly like:
1. The overall flow of the mock, it looks and feels realistic.
2. The use of real places for the title sequence.
My only critisisms have already been mentioned, but I'll say them anyway:
1. I like the shots you have used and would be more apropriate if the show was based in London, but even still using shots of locations and scenes from around the UK would better represent the shows target audience (the UK as a whole).
2. I really don't like the font you have used for 'Breakfast' at the end, to me this is the weakest thing about the mock.
3. While the music is fine, I'm not really sure it suits a morning show - prehaps try something a little 'lighter'.
4. I might extend the titles to 15 or even 20 seconds.
At the moment, it's 3/5 from me, but with some modifications it could easily be a 4/5 - nice mock, well done!
I particuarly like:
1. The overall flow of the mock, it looks and feels realistic.
2. The use of real places for the title sequence.
My only critisisms have already been mentioned, but I'll say them anyway:
1. I like the shots you have used and would be more apropriate if the show was based in London, but even still using shots of locations and scenes from around the UK would better represent the shows target audience (the UK as a whole).
2. I really don't like the font you have used for 'Breakfast' at the end, to me this is the weakest thing about the mock.
3. While the music is fine, I'm not really sure it suits a morning show - prehaps try something a little 'lighter'.
4. I might extend the titles to 15 or even 20 seconds.
At the moment, it's 3/5 from me, but with some modifications it could easily be a 4/5 - nice mock, well done!
DW
Beautifully done but FAR too London-centric bearing in mind (a) most people watching do not live in London, (b) it isn't broadcast from London.
WO
Excellent job - but as others have said, way too London-centric, especially for a programme that comes from Salford. I do like the music you've used, though - much better than what is currently used. (I do think that the current theme is awfully bland - suits the programme, I suppose...)