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rogers2 posts since 5 Mar 2017 new member
Meridian (South) South Today
I've tweaked the first image to take into account some of the feedback, and I have a couple more images of how I imagine the opening sequence.

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The reference to the new promo style is the usage of a bold colour on the first line on the strap, and the larger font in the opening sequence above.

The logo itself is comprised of the dot of the ITV logo and a layout that hopefully lends itself better to a circle than the current bottom left alignment.
DavidWhitfield468 posts since 16 Oct 2013
Tyne Tees Look North (North East)
The way you've done the date in your most recent post is nice, and does tally reasonably well with the new promos. There's no need for a clock, though. I really like the ticker in your first version, too, but the GMB logo looks messy to me, and is not helped by the shadowed text. Keep working on this. Some good ideas.
Last edited by DavidWhitfield on 6 March 2017 5:24am
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Neil Jones3,415 posts since 23 Dec 2001
Central (West) Midlands Today
This mock is crap. Could do with a lot of improvement.


Yeah well the first thing you posted in The Gallery was crap too. As was the first attempt at your second creation. You have come on a lot since you posted those, but I doubt that would have happened if somebody came along and wrote "this mock is crap" in the follow-up comments of everything without any further detail.

Moving on, I'm going to stick my neck out. I like the OP's mock and think there's a good idea in the works here. Not keen on the blue or purple or the drop-shadow mind you but those are minor. The rest of it though I quite like. And yes, get rid of the clock on the date screen, you don't need it.
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AlexEdohHD13465 posts since 25 Jul 2014
London London
This mock is crap. Could do with a lot of improvement.


Yeah well the first thing you posted in The Gallery was crap too. As was the first attempt at your second creation. You have come on a lot since you posted those, but I doubt that would have happened if somebody came along and wrote "this mock is crap" in the follow-up comments of everything without any further detail.

Moving on, I'm going to stick my neck out. I like the OP's mock and think there's a good idea in the works here. Not keen on the blue or purple or the drop-shadow mind you but those are minor. The rest of it though I quite like. And yes, get rid of the clock on the date screen, you don't need it.

Ah, good point.
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