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As ITN is to supply 5News again, I thought I'd design a new look! (November 2011)

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JK
JK08
5News:
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Studio:
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Reporter:
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Coming up:
After 5pm News:
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After OK!TV:
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5Weather:
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Studio:
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I hope you like it, constructive feedback welcome!
JA
james
Your mocks are starting to get better and more time is being spent planning and preparing them. I think this is your best mock to date. There are a few things that could be tweaked though, for example the text on the aston could be moved further away from the logo and a bit more colour would be nice. Other than that, you are starting to get the hang of how to do mocks.
CR
Critique
I agree that these are getting better, but there are a few flaws.

For a start, it's all a bit grey and dull, isn't it? I think some colour wouldn't go amiss.
DF
DrewF
As others have said, not too bad to be honest but still a few bits to improve on - I'm not a big lover of the fonts used, the studio could do with a bit more colour (and possibly a little more in the titles) and I don't like the transparent desk too much.

Improving though, slowly!
CR
Critique
I forgot to mention the transparent desk... In reality, it wouldn't work, as quite a lot of cabling would be there, for laptops, lights if the desk has inner-lighting, etc.
SR
SomeRandomStuff
Would echo everthing that has already been said, you're showing improvement... me likes this.

A bit of colour would be great, but use it sparingly. We dont want to see the swap shop again.

...shows promise, I'd like to see more of this mock... no rush.
JK
JK08
I've made some tweaks based on your comments..
5News:
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Studio:
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Reporter:
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Coming up:
After 5pm News:
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After OK!TV:
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5Weather:
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Floor map:
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I really hope that you think these changes have improved my design..
Constructive criticism welcome!
Last edited by JK08 on 8 November 2011 8:01am
AG
AxG
It's still dull, put some colour in the logo and astons.
DF
DrewF
Wood looks nicer in the studio, not sure about it in the titles.
JA
james
No wood in the titles. Add more colour to the other presentation elements, also your aston is identical to the first post so maybe you have uploaded the wrong image?
JK
JK08
james posted:
No wood in the titles. Add more colour to the other presentation elements, also your aston is identical to the first post so maybe you have uploaded the wrong image?


Yes I have, sorry.. I'll fix it!
DB
dbl
Yeah you've definitely improved, and the straps look better than what they use currently. Still needs a bit of tweaking.

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